Saturday, September 12, 2015

Rock Spring Farm: Three hundred years of courage and dreams

William Pilkinton had a dream. He wanted to own a farm in America. He knew all his dreaming and all his yearning would not make his dream real, so he developed a plan. He set sail from London in 1697 as an indentured servant, worked seven years to pay his debt, saved his earnings, and in 1726 began living his dream. For the next 22 years, Pilkinton lived the life of a yeoman farmer on a good-sized farm with no slaves.

A new dream

Rock Spring Farm's current owner, Randy Silvers, 64, fell in love with the property because of a deep ravine. He overlooked the thistle and the briers, the ramshackle two-story farmhouse and the derelict mobile home that sat vacant. This place was the answer to his prayers.

“I saw that gully and knew right away this farm would be our home. I didn’t even need to walk the rest of the land,” he said. 

A spring is at the bottom of that gully – the spring for which the farm is named, the spring from which Pilkinton drew his water, and the spring that feeds the well of the main house. Renewal. Rebirth. Reflection.

Deed in hand, Silvers set out to build his forever home. He pounded fence posts, attached rails, and painstakingly turned the overgrown fields into pasture for his horses. He razed the farmhouse, removed the mobile home, and built a two-story house atop an English basement. He salvaged the wood from the farmhouse to build out the barn and fashion fireplace mantles and decorative beams for his new home.

That was 20 years ago. Aging has a way of adjusting priorities, and living with rheumatoid arthritis can be painful. It makes mending fences, maintaining pastures, and weeding flower beds quite difficult.

“I have watched Randy slow down considerably,” said Carolyn Berry, Silvers’ wife of six years. “The upkeep for this place requires a lot of physical labor, and his health no longer allows him to keep Rock Spring Farm as the showplace it was just a few years ago. I knew we needed to sell the farm, but every time I mentioned it, Randy would tell me sternly he wasn’t going to sell it. He wanted to live here until the day he died.”

Plans change

After reading articles and watching news clips about a bed and breakfast that was being offered for sale through an essay contest, Silvers agreed a similar contest might be a nice way to transfer ownership of his beloved farm. He has no children and Berry’s children are not interested in living a farm life, so the contest made sense. Another plus - unlike listing the farm for sale with a real estate firm, Silvers would have a say in who would be the next owner.

The couple launched their contest about six months ago and began marketing to people interested in owning a hobby farm in rural Essex County. Dreamers started dreaming and essays trickled in.

“The essays are awe-inspiring – beautifully written, so heartfelt and deserving. People have told us the contest has given them permission to dream, to remember how much they loved growing up on farms, and to reflect about what truly is important in their lives. Some have said dreaming about owning the farm has brought them closer to their spouses, and others have said thinking about the contest has helped them realize how happy they are right where they are with what they have now,” Berry said. “Winning the contest will be a life-changing event for someone, but the contest itself is changing people’s lives.”

Dreams change

“When we launched the contest it was just that – an essay contest by which people could buy the opportunity to own the farm for a lot less than its assessed value of $600,000. As we read the essays and replied to posts on Facebook, we began to realize the incredible responsibility we have,” Berry said.

“This contest is more than an essay contest. It is someone's future, and it really no longer is ours. It belongs to the people who are submitting the essays. We realized God is using our farm and this contest to answer the prayers of someone who is dreaming of owning a small farm and needs this land more than we do. Knowing that we have a role in this miracle is extraordinary and provides us with amazing feelings of joy and thanksgiving.” 

The contest and the affirmation of the farm's beauty and the quality of Silvers' craftsmanship have given him permission to dream. 

“I have accepted that it is time to put the dream Margie and I had behind me. We lived our dream, and I am excited about the next chapter of my life,” Silvers said. “It is time for a new dream; it is time for Carolyn and me to live our dream.”

Berry said that was the first objective of the contest. “Randy needed to be at peace with selling the farm and moving,” she said. “The second objective is to deed the farm to someone who loves it as much as we do.”

Berry and Silvers have a passion for horses. The new owners need not. “They might love alpacas, goats, sheep, or donkeys,” Silvers said. “Some folks have written they plan to use the land to raise heirloom flowers and vegetables. Others want a peaceful place to live and entertain family and friends.”

Dreams can come true

October 1, 2015, is the deadline to enter the contest. More than 2,500 hopefuls have written their 1,000-word essays, submitted their $200 entry fees, and are praying they find out Thanksgiving Day they have been chosen as the farm’s new owner.

“Mr. Pilkinton had a big dream and he had the courage to make it come true,” Silvers said. “He molded this land into the Rock Spring Farm of his dreams. Twenty years ago it became my dream and I worked hard to make it just the way I wanted it. Now it's time for the dream to belong to someone else.”

To award the farm Thanksgiving Day, Berry and Silvers need to receive approximately 2,000 more essays. “Walt Disney said, ‘All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them,’” Silvers said. “This farm is a phenomenal opportunity. Its legacy is of dreaming and courage and it’s waiting to take shape for someone who has the passion and courage to enter this contest and pursue living on a hobby farm in rural Essex County."

To read the contest rules and other contest documents, visit <http://bit.ly/1ERoUJj>. To learn more about the contest, visit <rockspringfarm.org> and <facebook.com/virginiahorsefarm>.


Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Heather Sullivan and NBC 12 in Richmond, Virginia

NBC 12 in Richmond, Virginia, broadcast a news story about the Rock Spring Farm Essay Contest Wednesday, September 9, during its 5 p.m. newscast.

Thank you, Heather Sullivan!


http://www.nbc12.com/story/29978999/essex-couple-selling-farm-through-contest


Sunday, August 2, 2015

Media Coverage of the Rock Spring Farm Essay Contest


Newspapers

Washington Post - August 2, 2015
This 35-acre Virginia farm could be yours for $200 and a thousand words





Fredericksburg Free Lance-Star - April 8, 2015, April 20, 2015, October 1, 2015
Essex County couple plans to give away horse farm in essay contest



Dyson: Personal tidbits about people that don't make it into the paper are some of the most memorable



Deadline extended for essay contest, which has Essex County horse farm as prize

http://bit.ly/1iOdEDM


Television

NBC 12, Richmond, VA - September 9, 2015
Essex couple selling farm through contest

http://www.nbc12.com/story/29978999/essex-couple-selling-farm-through-contest



WJAL TV 7, Washington, D.C. - July 28, 2015
Va. couple gives away 35-acre horse farm in essay contest




Radio


WAMU 88.5: Metro Connection July 17, 2015
Couple plans to give away 35-acre Virginia farm through an essay contest




Internet


Horse Collaborative August 3, 2015
Yes, There’s an Essay Contest to Win a Historic Virginia Horse Farm for $200

http://bit.ly/1TabIGl



HelloGiggles.com August 3, 2015
For $200 and an essay, you could own a seriously massive farm

http://hellogiggles.com/essay-farm/



Patch.Com - July 21, 2015
Couple Giving Away 35-Acre Virginia Farm in Essay Contest

http://bit.ly/1IdwPzd



HorseAndMan.Com - July 21, 2015
WRITE AN ESSAY – WIN THIS HORSE FARM!! 

http://bit.ly/1DjLJFA



TheBlaze.Com July 21, 2015
Virginia Couple Giving Away Their 35-Acre, $600,000 Farm in Essay Contest
http://bit.ly/1JyUe0a



Curbed July 20, 2015
The Only Asking Price for This Virginia Farm is 1,000 Words




Time.com July 20, 2015
You Could Win a 35-Acre Farm Just By Writing an Essay




ThePlaidHorse.Com April 7, 2015
Win a 35-acre Virginia horse farm by writing an essay



  












Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Listen to WAMU's Metro Connection

Rebecca Sheir, the award-winning host of WAMU's Metro Connection, interviewed us Sunday, July 12, 2015. She is editing hours of talking with us into a six-minute story about the Rock Spring Farm Essay Contest that will be broadcast Friday at 1 p.m. and again Saturday morning at 7.
If you are unable to listen to the program on your radio, you can listen online and by podcast; follow the link below.
Rebecca reported on a neighboring town, Port Royal, two weeks ago. Click the July 3, 2015, link to learn about the town 10 miles north of Rock Spring Farm: Endangered Port Royal, Virginia, Fights To Keep Itself From History's Dustbin

Wednesday, July 1, 2015

Enter to win this 35-acre farm!

It could be yours!

Virginia is for Lovers! So where better to own a hobby farm to raise goats, alpacas, rabbits, sheep, chickens, horses, or more -- especially one you can own for an essay and an entry fee of $200? The 35-acre Rock Spring Farm, located on Virginia's Middle Peninsula in Essex County, will become the property of an essayist who can convince a panel of judges – educators, horse enthusiasts, and hobby farmers – he or she wants to live in rural Essex County. The Rock Spring Farm Essay Contest will end Oct. 31, 2015; all entries must be received by Nov. 17, 2015.  The new owner will be announced on or before Jan. 1, 2016.To learn more, scroll through the articles posted in this blog, or visit the Rock Spring Farm Facebook page:  
To download the entry form, contest rules, and FAQs, visit:  http://bit.ly/1ERoUJj

Are you struggling with writer's block?

Here are a few tips to help you improve your writing!


1. Don't stress.
2. This essay is not an academic paper; there is no research involved, and you do not have to write a traditional five-paragraph essay!
3. Write from your heart. Let us get to know you (anonymously).
4. Grab our attention with your introduction.
5. Tell us stories; how did you get involved with your hobby?
6. Show us your passion for your horses, alpacas, sheep, goats, chickens, or whatever animal has captured your heart by describing how you interact with them.
7. Why do you want to live on a farm in a rural area? How will living here bolster your hobby and improve your life?
8. Spend time organizing your essay. This is the most important step! Taking the time now to organize your writing will save you hours of revising time and spare you hours of anxiety.
9. When you begin writing, think of the computer screen or the blank piece of paper as your best friend. What would you tell your best friend? Write it!
10. Arrange your ideas so your words flow from one sentence to the next. Each sentence should connect and not sound choppy. The ending sentence of one paragraph should flow into and connect with the first sentence of the next paragraph.
11. Print your paper and read your writing out loud! You will be amazed at how hearing your words will improve your writing, especially if you are not reading from the computer screen!
12. Give yourself plenty of time to plan, organize, and write your first draft. Begin now!
13. Improve your writing by allowing your words to settle and your mind to rest. After your break, whether a day, a week, or even one hour, reread your work - out loud - from a hard copy! Does your writing make sense and sound fluid? If yes, begin the editing process. If not, revise your writing until you're satisfied.
14. Edit your paper one step at a time. Is the first letter of each sentence capitalized? (Check the entire paper for just capitalization mistakes.) Are proper nouns capitalized? Does each sentence have the proper punctuation? (Go through again to check for punctuation mistakes.) It might sound tedious, but focusing on one area at a time means you will be less likely to miss a mistake!
15. Have you written complete sentences, not fragments?
16. Check subject-verb agreement (They have, he has, etc.)
17. Did you write "your" when you intended to write "you're" for you are?
18. Are verb tenses correct?
19. Use a dictionary to make sure your words are spelled correctly; use a thesaurus to select the precise word!
20. Submit your paper BEFORE the deadline to ensure we receive it BEFORE the cut-off date!

I hope you have found these suggestions helpful! If you have questions, please post them here for all to see!

Good luck!


Here are a few Internet sites that you might find helpful:




























Wednesday, June 24, 2015

Flocabulary.com and the writing process

I love the Web site flocabulary.com. In fact, I love it so much that I bought a subscription for each of my students! (You can sign up for a trial subscription.) The site teaches via educational hip-hop music and videos. My students love it. I was reviewing the language arts section today with one of my students and clicked on the topic "Writing Process." The site had this to say:

The Writing Process
At this point in time, I would like all of you to get your pens and pencils out, your favorite piece of paper. Because we are about to Plan, Organize, Write, Edit and Revise.

I've been there, procrastinating for days,
Not putting anything on the page.
But if someday you're trying to get paid,
Put a little POWER in your writing game.
It doesn't matter the form or the topic,
Just use POWER like a socket.
P is for Plan, that's step one,
Organize next, in order to get it done.
W is Write, let the words flow,
Then time to Edit if you didn't know.
Last, Revise, make any changes,
A good writer rewrites and rearranges.
Submit your writing to wherever it goes,
Publish, print or email I suppose.
Write smart, keep your readers on their toes,
Here's a spark to make your writing explode.

Yeah, we've got the POWER to write,
Feeling so good, 'cause we powered the night.
First we Plan, son, then Organize,
Then we Write, then we Edit... Oh! Then Revise.

Plan first, decide what you're writing,
What's a good topic that will be exciting?
Who's your audience, who will be the reader?
Are you writing for your peer or a teacher?
Brainstorm ideas and then learn more,
That's research and it's good for sure.
Organize next, pick which facts
You want to lead with, and which to hold back.
Get ideas in order — that's great,
Put your best first and last like a relay race.
Then Write, let it flow right away,
Let your fingers tap dance on the keys, Cab Calloway.
It's a rough draft, it'll have mistakes,
That's OK, just write on the page.
Then Edit — read your writing back,
Is it really, really clear? Is it missing any facts?
Look it over carefully for any mistakes,
Be Sherlock Holmes on a grammatical case.
Get a tutor or a parent, someone you trust,
To put their eyes on it and say what's up.
Then Revise, rework and rewrite,
Put in time to make it come out nice.
Whether it was written by hand or typed,
Your writing game will be colder than ice!

Yeah, we've got the POWER to write,
Feeling so good, 'cause we powered the night.
First we Plan, son, then Organize,
Then we Write, then we Edit... Oh! Then Revise.

Tuesday, June 23, 2015

The decision to create the Rock Spring Farm Essay Contest

When my husband and I launched the Rock Spring Farm Essay Contest March 2015, we honestly had no idea where the path would lead; we still don’t. We knew of several “successful” real estate essay contests, but we also knew of many more that had not been successful. Even the storied Center Lovell Inn had experienced an unsuccessful essay contest a decade ago. Yet, it was the Center Lovell Inn that encouraged my husband’s acceptance of what he had considered another of my hare-brained ideas.

I remember when Bil Mosca and his wife, the original owners of the Center Lovell Inn Bed and Breakfast and Restaurant, held their essay contest in 1993. The novelty of the contest drew lots of local, regional, and national media attention. Janice Sage, who then was Janice Cox and married to Richard Cox, paid the $100 entry fee and submitted the winning 200-word essay. Nine years later, before Facebook and online social media, in fact, before the Internet had a strong hold on the American public, the couple sponsored a second Center Lovell Inn Essay Contest albeit an unsuccessful one. Fast forward to March 2015 and the Center Lovell Inn Essay Contest once again was making news. It was that round of media attention that persuaded my husband my plan had merit.

For almost a year I had tried talking with my husband about selling our farm. He would become quite agitated and angry when I broached the subject. He denied what was quite apparent to me – an aging body no longer could maintain the farm in the pristine condition it had been for 20 years. The grass is a bit taller now when he cuts it than he ever allowed it to grow a few years ago. The flower beds aren’t quite as colorful as they were when he and I first met. The broken fence boards hang another week or so before he fixes them. We don’t drive the horses as often as we used to, and mucking the stalls has become a chore. It is painful to watch him watch his baby, his pride and joy, and his labor of love languish. 

He and his late wife, Margie, bought the property in 1995 and built their home in 1996. Randy used some of the lumber from the old farm house to fashion beams and mantles for the new house. He used more of the lumber to build out the barn. Where once had stood a shell of a barn now stands a barn with five stalls, a tack room, and a feed room. The staircase from the old house now leads to a loft, and an old hand-shaved door now is the door for the closet that stores our horses’ grooming supplies. The fields that once produced wheat and barley now are pastures for the horses. Randy pounded every fence post into the ground and nailed every fence board to those posts. He created four pastures and a paddock and ran water to all but one field. He built an equipment barn, a carriage barn, a workshop, and a run-in for the horses. He built a two-bedroom cottage with the idea of operating a bed and barn – overnight accommodations for horse people – and their horses – traveling from one event to the next. Plans change.

I searched online for a local real estate agent who specializes in selling properties like ours. I found one I thought was suitable. He never toured the property because Randy was adamant, “We aren’t selling the farm!” The thought of strangers traipsing through the house, wandering about the farm, and nitpicking every flaw was too much for him to consider. Beloved horses and dogs that have crossed the Rainbow Bridge are buried on the farm; his wife’s ashes are buried here, and Randy had expected that he, too, would die and be buried here.

The essay contest had piqued his interest. Maybe it was a better alternative to the traditional real estate sign posted alongside the road. Perhaps the essay contest would appeal to people who would love the farm as much as we do – as much as Margie did. I saw it almost immediately – a sparkle in his eye, a brisker pace – an acceptance that life would go on without Rock Spring Farm. He and I would start a new journey, and we launched the Rock Spring Farm Essay Contest.

Although some real estate essay contests have been successful, we felt as if we were cruising uncharted waters. Fortunately, we had access to the Center Lovell Inn Essay Contest documents. I wrote asking for permission to use them, but I didn’t hear back. I contacted Mike Menefee, program manager, Charitable and Regulatory Programs, Virginia Department of Agriculture and Consumer Services. He suggested contacting the county’s commonwealth attorney. No problem – a former commonwealth attorney plans to enter the contest, so full speed ahead!

We debated details. How much should we charge as an entry fee? We settled upon $200 because it would require fewer entries and generate enough money for us to pay the remaining mortgage, buy a retirement home, pay Uncle Sam a huge chunk of money, and establish college funds for our four grandsons. Plus, the odds of submitting a winning essay would be greater than if we charged a lesser fee, but required more entries. We also settled on a longer essay. The writer in me could not imagine saying all I know I would want to say in a mere 200 words, so we set 1,000 as the limit. We figured our parameters were a win-win. 

The 2015 Center Lovell Inn Essay Contest once again has spawned many copycat contests. In addition to our contest, I know of six running concurrently throughout the United States. Each is alike, but each has its own special twist. I monitor the traffic and posts on Facebook. More than 99 percent of the comments are supportive; a few are unkind, even fewer are downright cruel. The June 6 private announcement of the Center Lovell Inn contest winner has unleashed a fury of comments hinting that Janice Sage was negligent in not telling participants that the winner would be assessed federal and state taxes. Others have called the contest a scam because posts have been deleted and she has not yet revealed the names of the winner and the first and second runner ups. There even have been complaints that she ignored the essays of those who submitted them early. Personally, I believe the writers of those posts are sore losers. The contest rules were posted and are matter of fact. Our rules are very similar. 

Randy and I have tried to be as transparent as possible with our contest. We have responded to each of the posts, (I apologize if we missed any), and we have consistently said we are not accountants, tax attorneys, or real estate attorneys, so PLEASE contact YOUR tax professionals to discern the impact of state and federal income taxes, transfer fees, and other expenses. We honestly do not know what that impact will be for the winner or for us. We have not been able to meet with our accountant; we hope to do so within the next month. I posted information in Google Docs that I found on the Web regarding the tax hit. We also have amended the contest rules as people have commented and made requests that were thoughtful and sensible. As I said, this contest is uncharted waters for us, and we are learning as we go along. We TRULY appreciate your input and your feedback, and we so enjoy reading your Facebook comments and your essays.

I want to avoid the chaos the Center Lovell Inn Essay Contest is experiencing now that the contest has ended. I want to reiterate in this post how the contest is being run and what you can expect. 

1. We intend to respond to every post that needs a response.

2. We will not respond to bitterness, nastiness, unkindness, and cruelty.

3. We will read every essay more than once. We most likely will read every essay several times – as we have done already with the ones we have received. It is a very, very difficult task. We had no idea when we launched this endeavor just how difficult it would be to narrow the selections. Every essay is heartfelt and deserving. We comment to each other that we only can imagine the angst we will feel when the time comes to select 25 finalists. We are glad we will not be the ones making the final selection. This conundrum is the reason we hope most of you will submit your essays well ahead of the deadline. Randy and I want to read and reflect on each of the essays without feeling hurried or pressured to meet the deadline. We want to be respectful of the energy and money you have invested. We also want to be respectful of the judges. We want them to have plenty of time to read and reflect. The decisions we face are monumental and forever will change the life of the winner. Please understand we feel a great sense of duty, honor, and responsibility to each of you. 

4. Because of legal matters, the essay contest must be based on skill. For that reason, I posted a rubric on Google Docs. We will weigh content, grammar, usage, punctuation, etc. We also will factor in the “heart” of an essay. Which ones grab and tug our heart strings. I couldn’t list the “heart” criteria on the rubric, because I don’t know what they will be, but Randy and I will know it – we will feel it; the essays will speak to us. The winning essay just might have spelling errors or punctuation errors, but it will have captured five hearts and spoken to us in a manner that sets it apart from the others. I pray every day for wisdom, guidance, and discernment. 

5. As noted, Randy and I will select 25 finalists and pass those essays along to our judges. At that point, the trustee will notify the 25 finalists. We will ask those who make the top 25 to keep their selections confidential, and we will invite them to contact us via e-mail with questions about the property. Once the judges have selected a winner and two runners-up, we will contact the top three and post the 25 entry numbers in no particular order. 

6. After the winner has acknowledged in writing his or her intent to accept the property, we will announce the names of the finalists, including the winner. However, if for any reason the winner decides not to accept the property, we will repeat the process with the first runner-up.

7. The three judges are our friends. One is a horse enthusiast; one is an educator; and one is a hobby farmer. We had difficulty finding judges because people we asked either intended to enter the contest themselves, or they have family members who intended to enter. It would not be ethical for them to be judging their own essays, or those of their family members, if those essays happen to make the top 25.

8. Integrity and honesty are important to Randy and me. If one no longer has those traits, then the person threw them away; no one stole them. Therefore, Randy and I pledge to you that your essays will remain anonymous, hence the trustee and entry numbers. We do not want to know who wrote the essays. We do not want this contest tainted with the hint of impropriety. Please refrain from including identifying information in your essays. Yes, you may include pictures – as long as we cannot identify the people in the photos! First names are fine (although pseudonyms would be better). If we know you, use pseudonyms! Please remain anonymous.

I know this post is lengthy, but I feel it is necessary commentary. If you are the praying type, please keep Randy, the judges, and me in your prayers; pray that we are enlightened and have open minds and hearts. Pray for the winner of the contest that he or she will be good stewards, and pray the other contestants will feel blessed and thankful they were able to march in the direction of their dreams.